Will do.Feel free to use any part of my Sub in yours.
I started adding yours in a few minutes ago.
(I often take several versions and then make huge COMBOs that allow me to choose 1) pick the favorite and delete the rest 2) get a more accurate "middle ground" translation by considering all three for context or 3) Just create my own based on my kinks or thoughts at the time.
Looking at yours, right off the bat, I started to laugh because you and I dealt with her seeing the shoes in the entryway.
You went with her thinking they look like her sons.
I went with her not recognizing them and wondering who they might belong to. (Yours actually makes more sense because a burglar wouldn't be polite and take their shoes off.)
So...that's one small example of how collaborating with a fellow non-Japanese speaker who creates similar "context/fan fiction" process as me.
I'll keep focusing on it and post asap. Cheers






